Score: 9

"Pretty good!"

submission: Story of Edward Spencer

date: May 30, 2008

I have to give you props. For this being your first ever flash this is pretty damn good!

You said so yourself the graphics arent very good, well pretty much everyone can improve on there graphics in one way or another. Yours are decent. I like them, they arent all fancy or whatnot, but yet, they arent crappy.

As many people have said this, but it really was to short. But yet, you only had two weeks to work on it. But defintally make sequal to this. I will be looking forward to it if you decide to make a sequal.

The puzzles werent hard. Maybe make them a bit harder next time?

Anyways, I liked the game all in all. Just wished it was a bit longer.

Oh I almost forgot, the intro of the game, maybe add a skip button? So that way if people want to play it again they can skip it?

And then in the end, it just goes to a blank white screen. I think you should either add a "To be continued" on it. =] Just some suggestions.

~Megan

Score: 6

"There is a problem...."

submission: Efface

date: May 30, 2008

Well, Im not going to rate. Considering I cant even play the game. The game opens, and all I see is part of a planet, and two hands with pens in the hands. And thats as far as it goes. I thought I lost connection for internet or something, so I restarted my computer. But it still wont work. I have no idea if any one else is having this problem. But I cant play it.

Score: 10

"Great Game!!"

submission: gimmeMore-s01e04

date: April 8, 2008

I love, and hate games like this. The music was really calming, and it didnt get annoying like most music in games do. It was hard! But yet, it wasnt to hard.

Score: 8

"Great game. But there is a problem."

submission: ASAHK.

date: December 21, 2007

Its a great game. But it is impossible to go anywhere if there is one guy in front of you and one guy behind you. You might as well kiss your ass goodbye. Because even when you try to kill one, you get hit before you can do anything.

Score: 10

"Loved it."

submission: DayMare Town

date: September 27, 2007

I loved how it was all black and white. And that there was no sound. It made it kind of creepy. Great game. I cant wait to see more from you.

Score: 10

"Wow. Truely amazing."

submission: The Sea of Glomp

date: September 27, 2007

Okay, I played for about 3 hours. And didnt get to far. I was talking to my girlfriend on the phone and kept cussing out the game because I died several times.

~I loved the idea that when you died, you had to go to your 'closet' and get a new fishsuit.

~I was in the maze, and I stopped for a minute so I could find my remote, and a dragon came out and killed me. O.o I so didnt know they would come out randomly. Although, I did like that part. I was just like "WTF?!" Tried to move out of the way, and died as soon as it touched me.

~Graphics were just amazing. There isnt anything you could do to make them better in my opinion.

~I loved(and hated) how you made it unclear about what you had to do in the game. But it was pretty obvious, you had to get your egg back from that damn bat thing. But, with the items, you dont know what to do with them. Like, the spoon, wtf? Haha I saw that and I was confused what I had to do with it.

~That big fish in the beginning of the game, I still havent figured out how to kill it. And its really freaking hard to get whatever item is there away from it.

~The worm and the hook. =D Haha that was great. I bit it just to see what would happen. And you just land on a boat and have to hop off. I thought you would just die. But nope! Great litte twist right there.

Those are just some of the things I really liked. There isnt really much that I dont like, other than the fact that it is really easy to die. And those damn dragons. Lol.

Great game. Hope you make more.

~Megan

Score: 5

"Okay.."

submission: -[Everytime We Touch]-

date: September 26, 2007

Well, I loved what you did with the song. But, having the same pictures play over and over and over again. Gets really boring. You need to do more, and then the flash would be so much better that what it is.

And no offense, but I really hope you dont really think you are going to get Daily First, and Weekly First. This is not good enough to get those.

Score: 7

"Hmm."

submission: Late Night Walk

date: September 26, 2007

Not bad. But it needs more. Like GameCharmer said, adding more random things like the homeless guy, would make it so much better. Your drawings are great, but I do agree with CraterCreator, clean up your line art a bit, and it will be perfect. I liked the music. Just have more animations, and it will be a great flash.

Score: 6

"People..."

submission: Madness of Madness Day

date: September 26, 2007

People are mean. You are new to flash. And the only way you are going to get better is by having people see your work, and giving you input about it, not just telling you its crap or whatever.

Anyways, your drawings could be a bit better. But if that were me drawing it, haha I dont think you would be able to tell what I was trying to draw.

Score: 7

"It was okay"

submission: Funkytown

date: September 26, 2007

Cute little animation. You could have done a little more to it to make it more interesting. But it was cute.

And I see you live in Portland. My dad lives up there. I love Portland.